tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9197617717871599677.post4032458198178477916..comments2011-12-10T06:50:26.160-08:00Comments on who did the what where and most Importantly, WHY?: Essay #2B Completeness and truthSparkytheCrash_Gadgethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17513907789113571465noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9197617717871599677.post-87527287039534685882011-10-24T15:24:03.218-07:002011-10-24T15:24:03.218-07:00FYI - It's a lot easier to read - thank you! Y...FYI - It's a lot easier to read - thank you! Your second topic question essay blog post was insightful. You complied with the format instructions and requirements - that's good. As far as your answer is concerned, you provided a passionate and well-researched answer. Your writing skills (typos, spelling and grammar) are above need some brushing up - Egyptian v. egyptian. Picky yes BUT, necessary since you are not only communicating your thoughts, you're "painting" a "picture" of who you are based on spelling, grammar and your care and concern for "completeness" as it were. What was good is that you write in your own voice and, therefore demonstrate your connection to the topic rather than answering as a student who is just answering the question. In other words, your answer reflects a natural-born love and curiosity for the subject matter.Ron Fortierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16045153437582805904noreply@blogger.com